Next to the hillside of lilies
And meadow of dawn
lies our blue vacant house.
How I want to go inside and sleep,
sprawled,
Next to you
on yellow carpet.
I peer over the broken fence
walk along its edges.
You stand on the oak patio smoking,
English accents
“Darling do you mind if I smoke this joint?”
“On our patio? Darling, why of course.”
We tiptoe to the roof with
white eyelashes
and sloshing blue feet.
We dance,
naked,
underneath red falling sky.
July 18th, 2011 at 7:44 am
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July 19th, 2011 at 12:12 pm
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July 29th, 2011 at 4:20 am
Very nice description and use of color =)